David Breeden

Transitory Space, Circle Rock, Nova Scotia, Canada #1 by Leah Oates

Revising Something

Transitory Space, Circle Rock, Nova Scotia, Canada #2 by Leah Oates

I was finishing a manuscript
I was calling Ice Cream
and Suicide
. That’s the
way I was seeing the
world just then—melting

everywhere. Hard-edged
ways out. Living in my
mind. Some war or other
all over the news. Opening
the file. Arranging the

poems. Typing a table
of contents. Revise.
Rethink. Rearrange.
Rewrite. I could do that
with my poems. Unlike,

you know . . . Ice Cream
and Suicide. Those looked
like my choices then.

Or opening that file and
revising a poem instead.
Transitory Space, Circle Rock, Nova Scotia, Canada #3 by Leah Oates

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